Young people always complain that they do not have enough time. What is your Opinion?
Your key words; - young people
- time
- don't have enough time
- I / We
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Introduction
Time is gold is the best proverb to define the important of time in our life as a human. It really suggests that time is more valuable than money. It cannot return back to us and we cannot catch and ask time to stop and wait. For those who really appreciate the meaning of time, they will obtain the highest profit at the end. While for those who ignore or take it for granted will lose it with regret. What about a group of young people who always complain that they do not have enough time. Is it possible?
Paragragh One/ Body
Is it possible if the young people say that they do not have enough time because of their tight timetables.
- School Hours - early in the morning - short break - extra classes
-Return home - tired - sleep - rest
-Homework - not finish
Paragraph Two/ Body
Is it possible if the young people say that they do not have enough time because of their plentiful of homework.
-The issue of a basket of homework becomes an issue among parents .... it is a pro and cont debates
-Homework - necessary - compulsory - to practice - train students to be expert in certain topic
-Subjects like Bahasa Melayu - English Language - Mathematics - Accounting - tough -long hours
Paragraph Three/ Body
Is it possible if the young people say that they do not have enough time when they still can spend free time with friends.
-Friends is a part of young people life- cannot stay alone
- if alone - isolated in the bedroom - online game
-Most of young people spend more time with friends rather than their family - fun time
-Boys - futsal - loafing at the shopping complex - other activities
-Girls - shopping - eating - strolling in town - other activities
-Not finish homework - not ready for the exam
Paragraph Four/ Body
Is it possible if the young people say that they do not have enough time when they still actively hang out in the Internet
-Mobile phone always in their hand - during eating - sleeping - watching TV etc
-A long list of applications - Twitter, Facebook, We Chat, Whatsapp, Telegraf etc
-Example; Whatsapp
- with thousands of friends and mates
- with thousands groups / geng - Alumni group, Cat' group, Ex- Group, Joker's Group etc
-So busy with all the applications - to reply a chat, to read a gossip in Twitter, to listen to musics, to upload pictures and wait for the comments etc
-Same reason - Not finish homework - not ready for the exam
Conclusion
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