SPM Essay Writing: A problem during your travel.

1. About travel
-A problem you face during your travel - how you solve the problem - what is the lesson.

Introduction

It was started as a beautiful evening that I woke up to the din sound of waves after tiredly wander around the town in the morning. I walked towards the window with the roses pattern curtains. The breathtaking view scenery with the sun-lit sky and sea blended together amazed me. I imagined of running and playing with my two best friends on the white sandy beach. Yeah, suddenly I missed them both. "Hurry up Tina, everyone is waiting for you downstairs!, my mid 40s mom at the door of the hotel room with a big sweet smile to me. 'Five minutes mom!' I ran to the bathroom, washed my oval pretty face. I felt so excited, Patong Beach just a few walks away. 

Rising action

After preparing myself with a green swimming suit, I ran to my family members on the beach. There were several tourists lying in the white sparkling sand, while several others were swimming in the cold blue sea water. 'Now, time to swim!' My dad tapped my shoulder while Adam, my younger brother pulled my hand towards the water. 'Dad, can I strolling along the beach first, alone, then, I join you!' I knocked Adam's head mocking his bloated belly. Adam cried angrily and left me and dad. 'Are you sure?' Dad looked at me with a wrinkle face. I nodded confidently showing my Fuji-film X-A3 in hand. My dad bought the camera when I got straight A's in the mid-exam few months ago. 'Okay, it is going to dark soon, so, only 30 minutes, then you come back here!'. 'Thank you dad, Love you the most!' 

I walked along the shore, let the gentle waves rolled endlessly and it touched my feet. I could feel the sea water was so a bit warm, and its familiar smelt of salt water filled my nostrils. My Fuji-film X-A3 played its active role and function, and all the remarkable exotic scenery around the beach could not be escaped from its eyes. All were being kept in its memory card. I staggered to one of the remote corners of the beach for the lush green of the fresh forest. Suddenly, a voice for help from the bushes not so far from me, I stood still, to confirm the sound. 'Help, help!' Somebody shouted for help behind the big canopy tree, about 150 meters ahead. I ran towards the sound, sneaking around the place. Nobody was there. 


The Climax
'Aha.. catch her Abu!' Two thin men in a shabby and smelly clothes approached me like a hungry tiger, I really shocked and terrified to see their drunken face. Tears slowly trickled down my cheeks. 'This is a fresh virgin Mat!' One of the men showed his disgusting tongue to me. At that time, I realized that I cannot show my tears and afraid. Dad already teach me about become a strong girl especially in front of the strangers. I gathered some courage left to catch their photos. 'Grab her camera Abu!' The man named Abu came closer and pulled the  camera strap from my neck. 'Please!!' I started to cry again. 'Help! Help!' I shouted at the top of my lung, ready to run. 'What are you waiting for, Abu!' Another man, Mat shouted angrily to his friend, and Abu immediately grabbed my hand. Arghhhh....... I did not know where the strength was come from, I just remembered my dad's promise to wait for me within 30 minutes! I bit his hand as hard as I could and ran away. Abu was crying painfully on the ground. Mat seemed to be panicked for a second before chasing me from behind. He snatched my feet, I fell to the ground. 'Where you want to run stupid girl!' 


Falling Action
I kicked his head very hard, and got up as fast as lightning. Immediately, I ran for my life, but the bad man, Mat was hot on my heels. I sprinted as quick as I could without even looking back to see how a distance between me and him. I jumped to avoid the rock, and rolled over the bushes, like an impala ran for his life. Out of the blue, the wailing sirens could be heard in a distance. Ohh... Dad! 'Help! Dad, help!' I cried loudly and ran fast to the beach as I could see the white sandy shore seemed to be as a torchlight, so I could soon recognize where to go. 'Tina! Tina!'. ' Sir, that was my girl!, ohhh...... ' The policemen, many of them, approached me. I fell to the ground again soon I saw a figure of my dad and mom. At that time, there was a very dark and black color around me. But, I still could hear my mom's cries and a very noisy sound from nowhere.


Ending
I was awake. Ohh.. I was in the hospital bed. One young nurse stood beside my bed to check my blood pressure. She smiled at me as I opened my eyes. Dad and mom sat on the grey sofa waited for the nurse to finish her routine work. 'Dad, mom, I am so sorry for all these incidents' I cried for forgiveness as the nurse walked out of the room. Mom hugged me tightly and dad patted my shoulder gently. 'The most important for us is your life Tina, we are so lucky you are safe, and the two guys also have been caught by the police!' Dad sat on the rattan chair beside my bed. 'Oh dad, mom, I realize several lessons to be kept in my mind. I will never walk alone again especially in a strange place like this. I also must continue the taekwando class that you have registered for me dad, I know that I have to have the art of defending myself from any threat'. 'Yes, you must attend the class attentively dear, for your own good!' Mom kissed my cheek. I smiled at both of them gracefully. 




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A summary

1. During travel.... So - Tina travels to Patong Beach. Patong Beach somewhere in Thailand.

2. Face a trouble
- The trouble is nearly being kidnapped and raped by two men....

3. How to solve?
- Tina kick ... shout for help .....run away..... brave and courage

4. Lesson
- Dont walk alone...
-Take a taekwando class with a focus