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Sunday, April 28, 2019

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Tuesday, April 23, 2019

A Synthesis In An Academic Writing


Synthesis writing is a form of analysis related to comparison and contrast, classification and division. On a basic level, synthesis requires the writer to pull together two or more summaries, looking for themes in each text. In synthesis, you search for the links between various materials in order to make your point. Most advanced academic writing, including literature reviews, relies heavily on synthesis.
- We must do a compare and contrast esp within the lit review part
- Try make a summary with specific theme which we may figure out while reading it

How to write a synthesis in writing a review in an academic writing
-Read the text carefully
-Find the key word / main point
-Restate them with OUR OWN WORDS briefly as TWO OR THREE SENTENCES only
-Organize our own paper using the theme we found in past journals above
-In our paper, subtopics must be SURROUNDING THE THEMES WE FOUND in their journals
-Next, our goal is to look for, find, and address gaps in the research and how our own thesis
and research will address these gaps (REFER TO NOTES ABOUT ‘A GAP’)

To Summarize;
Find key words ----- Write a summary ----- A Synthesis ----- Write about the GAP and how we fix it in our paper.



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Monday, April 22, 2019

HOW TO FIND A GAP IN THESIS WRITING


What is a GAP?
1. The gap, also considered the missing piece or pieces in the research literature, is the area that has not yet been explored or is under-explored. This could be a population or sample (size, type, location, etc.), research method, data collection and/or analysis, or other research variables or conditions. It means not only a literature review, but about the population or setting, conditions or variables, methods or analysis, and measurement or outcomes.

2. A gap is something that remains to be done or learned in an area of research; it’s a gap in the knowledge of the scientists in the field of research of your study. Every research project must, in some way, address a gap–that is, attempt to fill in some piece of information missing in the scientific literature. Otherwise, it is not novel research and is therefore not contributing to the overall goals of science

3. An example of a gap
Hosaka, Itao, and Kuroda (1995):
“… The relationship between the four damping factors, i.e. internal friction, support loss, airflow force in free space, and squeeze force, has not yet been clarified, so it is not obvious which one is dominant in actual micro systems.”

We know that this is a gap because they use the words “has not yet been clarified.”
Other phrases that might help you identify (or form) a gap statement are:
…has/have not been… (studied/reported/elucidated)
…is required/needed…
…the key question is/remains…
…it is important to address…

4. Once we notice and can identify the gap in the literature, we must tell our audience how we attempt to at least somewhat address in your project this lack of knowledge or understanding. This is often done in a new paragraph and should be accomplished in one summary statement, such as:

Therefore, the purpose of this study was to determine the effects of lead on the hepatobiliary system, especially on the liver and on the gallbladder (adapted from Sipos et al. 2003).

We may put it in the first sentence of the last paragraph in a paper’s introduction will start somewhat like this, indicating the gap fill.
 Some phrases you can use to indicate your gap “fill:”
“We therefore analyzed…”
 ”
“Therefore, the goals of this study are…”
“In this paper, we report…”



From personal understanding;
- Find a space where the new contribution can be fixed
-We find what is missing in their papers, so we can know what may be a possible ‘gap’ or opening for our potential research and contribution to the topic.
-We take an example;
   The topic of our research is about ‘Nasi goreng Versi Pantai Timur’ – then, we study all past journals and reviews about the topic. After details or long and intensive reading, we notice that no past reviews about ‘belacan’ inside Nasi goreng. They may talk about the ingredients for old, for children and for an infant. They may also talk about time to cook it, or the good or bad of eating it. But, none of them debated about ‘belacan’ as an additional flavour into it. So, this is our potential to write and study about it, begin with how ‘belacan’ is made, types of belacan, who always consume it in their meal, how much to put inside the cooking meal, the procedure of frying Nasi goreng with a ‘belacan’, how its taste etc. Is it posibble?


Another example and practice.
In the following examples, identify the gap statement. Then, identify the fill. Notice if there are any specific words or phrases used to signal either of these moves.

1. Adapted from Costa, Robertson, and Quilliam (2015):
Paralytic shellfish poisoning occurs worldwide, and harmful algal blooms, including those responsible for PSP, appear to be increasing in frequency and intensity. PSP outbreaks in Portuguese waters have been associated with blooms of Gymnodinium caenatum in the late 1980s to early 1990s, then again after 2005. According to the national monitoring program in Portugal, G. catenatum were not reported along the Portuguese coast during the 10-year period from 1995 to 2005. The aims of this study were to fully characterize the toxin profile of G. catenatum strains isolated from the NW Portuguese coast before and after the 10-year absence of blooms to determine changes and potential implications for the region. Hydrophilic interaction liquid chromatography tandem mass spectrometry (HILIC-MS/MS) was utilized to determine the presence of any known and emerging PSTs in sample extracts.

Gap statement: “According to the national monitoring program in Portugal, G. catenatum were not reported along the Portuguese coast during the 10-year period from 1995 to 2005.”

Fill: “The aims of this study were to fully characterize the toxin profile of G. catenatum strains isolated from the NW Portuguese coast before and after the 10-year absence of blooms to determine changes and potential implications for the region.”


2. Adapted from Littler, Ciringh, and Lindsey (1999):
The exchange process frequently observed in polypyrrane condensations is proposed to occur by the acid-catalyzed fragmentation of a polypyrrane 1 into pyrrolic 2 and azafulvene 3 components.15 As illustrated in Scheme 2, recombination of 2 and 3 can form a new polypyrrane 4 that cannot be formed by direct condensation of the dipyrromethane and aldehyde. Ultimately this process leads to the production of a scrambled mixture of porphyrins. The factors that promote the scrambling process in MacDonald-type 2 + 2 condensations are poorly understood, but suppression of scrambling is essential for preparing large quantities of pure trans-porphyrins. In this paper we describe a study of a wide range of reaction conditions for the 2 + 2 condensation that has led to refined synthetic procedures for the preparation of trans-porphyrins.

Gap statement: “The factors that promote the scrambling process in MacDonald-type 2 + 2 condensations are poorly understood….”

Fill: “In this paper we describe a study of a wide range of reaction conditions for the 2 + 2 condensation that has led to refined synthetic procedures for the preparation of trans-porphyrins.”


3. Adapted from Pukhov and Meyer-ter-Vehn (2002):
In the present paper, we focus on laser wake field acceleration in a new, highly non-linear regime. It occurs for laser pulses shorter than λ(p) but for relativistic intensities high enough to break the plasma wave after the first oscillation. In the present relativistic regime, one should notice that the plama wave fronts are curved and first break new the wave axis and for lower values than the plane-wave limit. This has been studied in 2D geometry in [14-17]. Here, we present 3D PIC simulations of two representative cases. The case (I) is just marginally above and the case (II) is far above the breaking threshold.

This question is a little trickier! The authors use “In the present paper…,” then, “In the present regime…,” and finally, “Here…,” all of which sound like signalling words for filling the gap. But where is the gap? We have to look closely at what exactly is being said. It is true that the first statement appears to be somewhat of a gap fill, although they haven’t yet given us a gap statement. The authors go on to say “This has been studied in 2D geometry,” which brings us back to move 1(iii), identifying critical evidence from the literature.

Thus, the gap statement is not explicit. It is a combination of stating that this concept has been studied in 2D, followed by announcement that the authors will study it in 3D.

Fill: “Here, we present 3D PIC simulations of two representative cases.”

Although the first sentence (“… we focus on laser wake field acceleration…”) could also be considered part of the fill, because it comes before the gap statement and is also less descriptive, it functions more as an introduction to these moves.


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