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Showing posts with label STORY OF LIFE. Show all posts
Showing posts with label STORY OF LIFE. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 29, 2022

MY DEFINITION OF LOVE.


LOVE. ðŸ’—💗💗

LOVE IS VERY STRANGE.
IT COMES LIKE A FLASH
UNEXPECTED

LOVE IS WEIRD
IT COMES WITH NO EYES
CANT SEE THE FACE
IT COMES WITH NO FINGERS
CANT COUNT THE AGE

LOVE IS HURT
IT MAKES HEART TO BE INJURED
BY THE BLADE OF LONGING
LOVE IS PAIN
IT MAKES HEART CRYING OF LONG-WAIT

LOVE IS SCARY
IT MAKES HEART TO ALWAYS IN TEARS
IT MAKES HEART ALWAYS HOPING TO THE CREATOR
A HELP, A STRENGTH, A SHOULDER, A BLESS, A LIGHT, A MIRACLE
IT MAKES HEART ALWAYS SEEKS THE CREATOR
TO ALWAYS BE THERE, TO HEAR, TO UNDERSTAND, TO GRANT THE WISHES AND WHISPERS

THIS IS LOVE, NOT FOR EVERYONE
MAY ONLY FOR ME..
THE LAST HOPE
SURRENDER TO THE CREATOR, HIS BLESSING
ALLAHU AKBAR..💗💗💗💗💗




My heart, my love
2022 / April


 

Saturday, September 21, 2019

POEM IS WRITTEN FROM A DEEP HEART


OLD MOM.

A mom,
She is a hidden treasure
Become a very priceless figure for
those who always appreciate her with thank and respect
Become a very gloomy statue for
Those who know her present but without a blink of eyes

A mom,
Back then, she was a very busy carer and giver
She was the best feeder
She was the best free homekeeper
She was the best gardener
She was the best teacher
Even the best maid ever
Indeed, it is not a 'was'
But,
She is the best for everything until
She closes her wrinkle eyes forever

Old Mom,
Sometimes, She cries for nothing
She will not show it to us
Her unstop prayers without our knowing
In contrast,
We always miss to say thank
We always miss to kiss her
We always miss to hold her hand
We always forget every necessary things about her

Old Mom,
Her cries and prayers for us to the heaven
Put your eyes and heart
Before it too late. 



Teacher Yasmine,
2019 / Sept

Friday, November 23, 2018

SPM ESSAY: WRITING A STORY ABOUT AN UNUSUAL HOBBY.



TEACHER PROVIDES THE MAIN CONTENT, STUDENTS ELABORATE AND WRITE BY YOUR OWN...


3. A story about a teenager with unusual hobby


  # Explain bout the hobby
= UNUSUAL means a bizarre or weird hobby
= or a person who like to do a strange activity as their hobby
= Example of unusual hobby;
     = do a tree-shaping
     = grave hunting
     = handcuff collecting
     = teabags cover collection
     = carving egg shells 
     = noodling (fishing with hands in the river or paddy field)
     = weather forecasting
     = cosplay
     = rebuilding antique old and broken vehicles
     = playing dead
     = appearing in the background of TV programs
     = mooing 
     = tattooing cars
     =geocaching
     = knitting clothes
     = dried flower collecting


  # How friends also become interested in it
- Something bizarre ... if you always do / make / practice in front of them, ask them to try, once they enjoy they will make it as their own favorite hobby too. 




Begin the story with "Even though it was a strange hobby, everyone came to love it ....


"Even though it was a strange hobby, everyone came to love it until some of them come to me with a big thank. They claim that I am the starter who introduce that unusual hobby to them. Otherwise, they dont have any unique and remarkable hobby! 

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SOME NOTES THAT MAY HELP YOU TO WRITE......

1. Hobby is like tastes, it different from one person to another. 
2. People spend a lot of money and time and money for their hobby
3. Some people like a challenging hobby
4. Some others choose extreme sports as their hobby
5. People take photos and videos of themselves enjoying their hobbies
6. There is a very wide range of hobbies
7. A hobby is a special work to do by a person for the sake of an amusement
8. A hobby is an activity or interest pursued for delectation and not as a main vocation
9. Hobbies depend on several factors such as lifestyle, preference, family background etc
10.  Hobby always become the most likely to do during leisure time





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SPM CONTINUOUS WRITING: WHY PEOPLE HAVE NO FREE TIME?




2. Time.
  - Why people dont have free time?
  - Suggest ways to use time better


A discussion (The essay about TIME already put in this blog, scroll down)

Why people dont have free time?
1. Very busy - pack schedule
                     - as parents who work for life
                     - as student ... many homework, extra classes, co-curricular activities etc

2. Dont know how to manage time - no discipline
                                                        - not punctual

3. Irresponsible person - never appreciate time
                                     - dull life

4. People multitask a lot - brain cannot manage many tasks at the same time
                                        - better do and finish one task fully before another task begins
                                 
5. People dont prioritize - they dont know what should to be done first or last
                                        - Automatically they organize their time efficiently




Suggest ways to use time better
1. Must have a discipline - punctuality
                                        - appreciate time

2. Schedule your works

3. Prioritize your works

4. Avoid procrastination

5. Avoid multitasking

6. Avoid stress

7. Start early




DISCUSS ALL POINTS GIVEN ABOVE WITH YOUR FRIENDS AND TEACHER IN THE CLASSROOM... YOU MAY ADD ANOTHER POINTS


Thursday, November 22, 2018

SPM Essay Writing: A problem during your travel.








1. About travel
-A problem you face during your travel - how you solve the problem - what is the lesson.


Introduction
It was started as a beautiful evening that I woke up to the din sound of waves after tiredly wander around the town in the morning. I walked towards the window with the roses pattern curtains. The breathtaking view scenery with the sun-lit sky and sea blended together amazed me. I imagined of running and playing with my two best friends on the white sandy beach. Yeah, suddenly I missed them both. "Hurry up Tina, everyone is waiting for you downstairs!, my mid 40s mom at the door of the hotel room with a big sweet smile to me. 'Five minutes mom!' I ran to the bathroom, washed my oval pretty face. I felt so excited, Patong Beach just a few walks away. 


Rising action
After preparing myself with a green swimming suit, I ran to my family members on the beach. There were several tourists lying in the white sparkling sand, while several others were swimming in the cold blue sea water. 'Now, time to swim!' My dad tapped my shoulder while Adam, my younger brother pulled my hand towards the water. 'Dad, can I strolling along the beach first, alone, then, I join you!' I knocked Adam's head mocking his bloated belly. Adam cried angrily and left me and dad. 'Are you sure?' Dad looked at me with a wrinkle face. I nodded confidently showing my Fuji-film X-A3 in hand. My dad bought the camera when I got straight A's in the mid-exam few months ago. 'Okay, it is going to dark soon, so, only 30 minutes, then you come back here!'. 'Thank you dad, Love you the most!' 

I walked along the shore, let the gentle waves rolled endlessly and it touched my feet. I could feel the sea water was so a bit warm, and its familiar smelt of salt water filled my nostrils. My Fuji-film X-A3 played its active role and function, and all the remarkable exotic scenery around the beach could not be escaped from its eyes. All were being kept in its memory card. I staggered to one of the remote corners of the beach for the lush green of the fresh forest. Suddenly, a voice for help from the bushes not so far from me, I stood still, to confirm the sound. 'Help, help!' Somebody shouted for help behind the big canopy tree, about 150 meters ahead. I ran towards the sound, sneaking around the place. Nobody was there. 


The Climax
'Aha.. catch her Abu!' Two thin men in a shabby and smelly clothes approached me like a hungry tiger, I really shocked and terrified to see their drunken face. Tears slowly trickled down my cheeks. 'This is a fresh virgin Mat!' One of the men showed his disgusting tongue to me. At that time, I realized that I cannot show my tears and afraid. Dad already teach me about become a strong girl especially in front of the strangers. I gathered some courage left to catch their photos. 'Grab her camera Abu!' The man named Abu came closer and pulled the  camera strap from my neck. 'Please!!' I started to cry again. 'Help! Help!' I shouted at the top of my lung, ready to run. 'What are you waiting for, Abu!' Another man, Mat shouted angrily to his friend, and Abu immediately grabbed my hand. Arghhhh....... I did not know where the strength was come from, I just remembered my dad's promise to wait for me within 30 minutes! I bit his hand as hard as I could and ran away. Abu was crying painfully on the ground. Mat seemed to be panicked for a second before chasing me from behind. He snatched my feet, I fell to the ground. 'Where you want to run stupid girl!' 


Falling Action
I kicked his head very hard, and got up as fast as lightning. Immediately, I ran for my life, but the bad man, Mat was hot on my heels. I sprinted as quick as I could without even looking back to see how a distance between me and him. I jumped to avoid the rock, and rolled over the bushes, like an impala ran for his life. Out of the blue, the wailing sirens could be heard in a distance. Ohh... Dad! 'Help! Dad, help!' I cried loudly and ran fast to the beach as I could see the white sandy shore seemed to be as a torchlight, so I could soon recognize where to go. 'Tina! Tina!'. ' Sir, that was my girl!, ohhh...... ' The policemen, many of them, approached me. I fell to the ground again soon I saw a figure of my dad and mom. At that time, there was a very dark and black color around me. But, I still could hear my mom's cries and a very noisy sound from nowhere.


Ending
I was awake. Ohh.. I was in the hospital bed. One young nurse stood beside my bed to check my blood pressure. She smiled at me as I opened my eyes. Dad and mom sat on the grey sofa waited for the nurse to finish her routine work. 'Dad, mom, I am so sorry for all these incidents' I cried for forgiveness as the nurse walked out of the room. Mom hugged me tightly and dad patted my shoulder gently. 'The most important for us is your life Tina, we are so lucky you are safe, and the two guys also have been caught by the police!' Dad sat on the rattan chair beside my bed. 'Oh dad, mom, I realize several lessons to be kept in my mind. I will never walk alone again especially in a strange place like this. I also must continue the taekwando class that you have registered for me dad, I know that I have to have the art of defending myself from any threat'. 'Yes, you must attend the class attentively dear, for your own good!' Mom kissed my cheek. I smiled at both of them gracefully. 




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A summary

1. During travel.... So - Tina travels to Patong Beach. Patong Beach somewhere in Thailand.

2. Face a trouble
- The trouble is nearly being kidnapped and raped by two men....

3. How to solve?
- Tina kick ... shout for help .....run away..... brave and courage

4. Lesson
- Dont walk alone...
-Take a taekwando class with a focus




Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Booking.com is my First Choice for travel and holiday

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Click above link will bring you to Booking.com to find the most suitable yet affordable accommodation wherever you go or travel, not only within the country, but when you go abroad too.


From my experience in traveling around Asia, I always choose Booking.com because:
1. It always gives a promotional discount, deal of the day to the members
2. And, if you are a frequent traveler, you can get a genius bonus, and a chance to get the cheapest deal is there for you
3. You can modify or cancel the booking within its time range
4. Not only the price, but, also you can discuss or complain to Booking.com if any problem arise
5. No need to do a prepayment, you can pay at the counter when you check-in
Here, you have a choice. If you have money in the bank, you can choose the stay with prepayment or deposit needed, and if you dont have money in the bank, you can choose to pay at the counter.
I always choose the stay with an offer to pay at the counter with their currency
So, i will prepare the money from home.

Several experiences;
First, when i already booked one hotel somewhere in Jamsil in Seoul, South Korea, But then i realized it is too far from the downtown and not suitable due to its subway station too. I go to Booking.com and told them, they said I have to pay to the hotel. Then, i email the hotel and talked to the manager what actually happen and why i have to cancel the booking, luckily, i got the very kind-hearten manager. He said, yes, you no need to pay, I will cancel it. Ohh... im so happy, and I told him I pray to The Almighty Allah to cherish his life and his hotel will be famous. That is a story bout cancelling the booking, it is a luck to meet a very kind person like them to deal with.

Another experience, when I booked the stay in Malaysia. Both are in Kuala Terengganu, i did not really remember the matter, but, to sum up, both performed badly to the customers. The recent hotel i booked was several months ago, I already stood in front of the hotel with all my bags, then she called and said that my booking was cancelled because she could not read my Visa card. But, i already in front of the door! and I want to pay in cash!! So mad, i walked to the nearby hotel to check in. At the counter, when i told the girl bout that hotel, two girls beside me also said 'yes, kak, we too. when we go to the hotel, they said our booking was cancelled and we are from Klang!' Oh my GOD, dont do like this to the girls, they are 'ANAK DARA' and far away from their home, if you cancel then they dont know where to stay, if any bad thing happen like kidnap or else, who wants to take a responsibility?? Police will go to your hotel too!! Me, my home just 3 hours drive from here, so I can go back. So, this hotel just a few walks from the bus station I dont recommend, if you want to go to Kuala Terengganu, you can go to Mini Indah Hotel not far from the beach, their services are good and the price also cheap.

Okay, it sounds like I said bad things here, but not Booking.com, the problem is the hotel. So far I still trust Booking.com for another good services like no prepayment, can cancel the booking free, offer deal today discount, can check-in earlier and check-out late for a genius travel like me. Booking.com maybe have to recheck the hotels or accommodations policy or any necessary facilities so the customers always trust Booking.com as a provider for the traveler and care bout their customers' matter regarding the stay. This is my opinion and suggestion as their loyal customer.

One story: Bong House in Seoul. Yes, this is a very good stay in Booking.com that you can choose when you travel to Seoul. I ALWAYS CHOOSE BONG HOUSE when i go to Seoul. And, for January 2019 winter, I stay for 8 nights at Bong House. Mr Bong is a kind-hearten man, he can consider our need, and he's very helpful and sweet person. ALHAMDULILLAH, i always get big discount when I stay there, and one time, in year 2016, He gave me a four persons room under the price of three persons room, Im so happy and i trust him as a good and a man with a big heart. You can cook like at your own home in there, I got a room with a traditional like hanok bed etc, it just around 10 minutes walk from Hyehwa Station Exit 4. You will pass by Ediya Coffee Shop, CU Mart, and other small shops and restaurants, NO HILL so you will not be tired walking, just enjoy walking until you reach CU Mart, then turn left, and Bong House just few steps in front of you!

There are several stays in Seoul, Jakarta, Bandung, Vietnam, including Malacca and Kuala Lumpur. I will update them in future.

Dont forget Bong House when you go to Seoul, South Korea. You can choose via Booking.com OR you can email him directly too.


HAPPY HOLIDAY AND CHOOSE BOOKING.COM FOR YOUR STAY PROVIDER....

WE TRAVEL TO SEE AND ADORE THE SPEECHLESS BEAUTY OF THE SCENERY, TO LEARN THE DIFFERENT LANG AND CULTURE IN ANOTHER COUNTRY, AND ALL OF THESE TO BRING US DOWN TO EARTH, TO THE GREAT CREATION OF ALLAH TAALA ON EARTH, TO HIM ALL OUR PRAISE AND SURRENDER.... ALLAHU AKBAR!


LITERATURE REVIEW: THEORIES RELATED TO LEARNING WRITING



There are many theories about the teaching and learning English Lang as a second language (L2) as well as theories of teaching and learning writing. Some of these theories are Second Language Acquisition Theory by Kreshen (1982), Chomsky Universal Grammar Theory, Chomsky SLA Theory (Ren Hulin & Xu Na, 2014), Writing Theory (Homstad & Thorson (1994), Situated Cognition Theory, Construction Theory of Writing, and others. The researcher intends to highlight the Situated Cognition Theory to help in understanding the study.


Situated cognition theory
This theory is specifically discussing about writing practices. The Situated Theory (Wilson, 2002; Greeno, 1998; Brown, Collins, & Duguid, 1989) is very useful in explaining about two important matters to affect students’ performance and ability to write. One, writing instruction. Two, an assessment that is sensitive to the conflicting demands of the act of writing.

According to Situated Theory, the cultural background, societal context, and individual situations that pass through teaching (D’Andrade, 1981) are counted in reviewing the writing of the students. Moreover, the theory also believe that learning to write is achieved in the periodic process, situated in the genuine and dynamic learning environments as the act of learning itself (Duguid et al., 1989). This theory recognizes the dynamic nature of learning based on the view of learning in which “cognitive activity is circulated across individuals and situations” (Robbins & Aydede, 2009).

Situated Cognition Theory also focuses on the time, purposes, and needs of the learners in their writing session. In the modern classroom, the theory has recognized that the relationship between the students and teachers is different compare to a traditional, transmission of knowledge-centred classroom. In this view, teachers are not the distributors of knowledge but they are the facilitators pedagogically. To note, this notion of the relationship between students and teachers is in attempt to explain that writing lesson is not just to learn in the classroom, but it needs a kind of the instruction that emphasizes the side-by-side learning, repeated practice, modelling and scaffolding in which all the processes looks more like apprenticing (Lave, 1997; Rogoff, 1991).

One model that looks suitable to use in teaching a writing process is the Six+1 Trait Writing Model by Bellamy (2005). The Analytic Writing Continuum (Bellamy, 2005), which includes refined and clarified definitions of the constructs measured, assesses the following elements of writing:
• Content
The content category describes how effectively the writing establishes and maintains a focus, selects and integrates ideas related to the content or body of the composition (i.e., information, events, emotions, opinions, and perspectives). In addition, put some evidences, details, reasons, anecdotes, examples, descriptions, and characteristics in the explanation of the ideas.
• Structure
The structure category describes how effectively the writing establishes logical arrangement, coherence, and unity within the writing processes of a composition. It can be called as the organization of the composition writing.
• Stance
The stance category describes how effectively the writing converses a perspective by using a certain level of formality, elements of style, and tone suitable for the audience and purpose of writing. It may be suit to be known as a style of writing.
• Sentence Fluency
The sentence fluency category describes how effectively the sentences are constructed to fulfil the purpose of the writing, in terms of rhetorical purpose, rhythm, and flow.
• Diction (Language)
The diction category describes the accuracy and suitability of the words and vocabularies for the writing task and how effectively they create imagery, provide mental pictures, or convey feelings and ideas to be written in the composition.
• Conventions
The conventions category describes how effectively the writing demonstrates age-appropriate control of usage, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, and paragraphing. 

Peach & Campos (2008) have reported that the national panel of experts on student writing and the senior NWP researchers determined that even the Six +1 Trait Model necessarily complete, it still required certain modifications to make it more appropriate for the use in research studies. And, the following modifications were implemented in the NWP Analytic Writing Continuum (Peach & Campos, 2008) prior to the scoring conference:
• The scale of the rubric was extended from four to six points in order to ensure sufficient discrimination and therefore to allow increased sensitivity to any changes that might be observed.
• The language defining the traits was clarified to improve the consistency of the assessment of the writing.
• The assessment was modified to focus entirely upon the student writing (where, on occasion, the rubric previously included references to the reader’s responses or to the writer’s personality as the basis for the assessment).

Most of these studies have examined the use of the respective traits in one school in a neighborhood, one grade, or one classroom. All the studies have shown the positive change in student writing performance (Jarmer et al., 2000; Bellamy, 2000). In the fall, for example, in the first test administered, only 14 second graders showed an exceptional brainstorm of ideas, in which by spring that number had risen up to 262 students. Next, in a yearlong intensive traits writing program with Dr. Ruth Culham where the children or kids even primary students have proven a significant writing growth across the six traits of writing (Bridges, 2011). All these examples show that the writing practices using the Six+1 Trait Writing Model may help students to improve their writing performance in English Lang subject.






To compare, this Six+1 Trait Writing Model in the process of composition writing seems to have nearly a similar concept to the latest writing research by Mukundan et al., (2013). They have elaborated that the writing skills of students are taught and assessed based on five different domains of writing (Mukundan et al., 2013) which are;

• Content
The content has to be entirely relevant to the topic of a composition.
• Organization
The structure of the composition writing which includes the logical sequence, clearly stated, and the cohesive presentation of the ideas.
• Language Use
The writing which emphasizes a correct grammatical rules in the entire content of the composition.
• Vocabulary
The sentences built and arranged with an appropriate words choice, using bombastic words, proverbs and idioms etc.
• Mechanisms
The writing which emphasizes on the appropriate flows of paragraphing, punctuation, spelling etc.

Hence, the researcher knows that these two comparison can be blended to suit the situation of the students in the classroom in teaching them how to write effectively, so students can have a better performance in writing as well as in English Lang subject.


Tuesday, November 20, 2018

AN ACADEMIC WRITING REVIEW: A pilot study in a quantitative research.


3.5.1    Pilot Study
Pilot Study or pre-study is a method used to assess the validity and reliability of the instrument which was built for the study. Among the aims of the pilot study is to ensure that there are questions in the questionnaire contains items that are easily understood, good content, to avoid confusion and to test the reliability questions. According to Baker (1994), a pilot study used to help the researcher to get an early indication regarding the items in the questionnaire, whether they may or may not be applicable in answering the research questions. Borg and Gall (1983) suggested that a pilot study was conducted prior to the study, which is before the researcher distributes the real questionnaires to the real targeted respondents. Pilot study will reveal the lack of the early research questions, and the researcher had more time to improve their questionnaires before being distributed among the real respondents. This is to avoid more time and costs being wasted. That is one of the advantages of having a pilot study, which is to ensure that the questions in the questionnaire contain easy-to-understand items, good content, avoidance of confusion and incontestability questions. The best is when the researcher did not use the same respondents for their real questionnaire. 

An example, for this pilot study, the respondents of 30 students in one secondary school in a state in Pantai Timur are guided to answer the questionnaire. After collecting all the questionnaire papers, the researcher runs the Alpha Cronbach test to know the reliability of the items in the questionnaire paper.


According to Hair (2003), the level of reliability of an instrument is accepted and showed that the respondents were answering questions or statements consistently and almost accurately. And, this reliability of the items is tested based on the Cronbach Alpha which explains the strength of the relationship between items as shown in Table 3.1 below.

Another example, the pilot study was conducted among students in UTM Skudai regarding the study  of a generic skill among the graduates as a preparation for their job field in future. In this study, a pilot study was conducted on 30 students who became respondents with the distribution of a set of questionnaires to be used in the actual study. Pilot study on this questionnaire is conducted to ensure that the field to be studied is able to provide good and accurate results. According to Azizi Yahya et al. (2006), many efforts and money have been invested throughout the study period from the planning stage to the questionnaire. The questionnaire in this modified study was administered on 30 students who were not involved as a sample of the study. This is to ensure that the questionnaire used has a consistency from the aspects of item level, the objectives and the understanding of the item itself. The findings from the pilot study conducted by using alpha Cronbach test from 44 items in the questionnaire showed that the reliability was 0.981. According to Chua Yan Phiaw (2004) in the Alpha Cronbach Coefficient table demonstrates the value of internal reliability of these items in excellent order and all items are acceptable because of their high reliability. Cronbach's Alpha value is 0.981 and it is approaching the value of 1. The more Cronbach Alpha value approaches to the value of 1 is the best. Here, it can be concluded that the question raised by the researcher is reliable and can be understood by the respondent. The result of the pilot test shows that respondents do not have problems in understanding the questionnaire items. Table 3.2 below shows the findings of the pilot survey.


Table 3.1: Alpha Cronbach



Alpha Coefficient Range

The Strength of The Relationship

< 0.6
0.6 < 0.7
0.7 < 0.8
0.8 < 0.9
0.9

Weak
Moderate
Good
Very Good
The Best





Table 3.2: The result of a reliability test 


Case Processing Summary

N
%
Cases
Valid
29
82.9
Excludeda
6
17.1
Total
35
100.0
a. Listwise deletion based on all variables in the procedure.
                                                                                                          

Reliability Statistics
Cronbach's Alpha
N of Items
.981
44





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