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Saturday, November 16, 2013

Learn to write an essay; My Neighbour

Topic ; My neighbour

Neighbour is someone live housebound at my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he so

kind man.My neighbour’s job is doctor,he is Chinese man.I like visit he because he serve me a

sunquick .He’s hometown at Sungai Petani,Kedah.


He’s work at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.He’s child school at the

SK Demit (2) he’s child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I will so happy

and proud because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house I feel so proud with he and

invite he come again any time.


We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the

workplace with his car,the car Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car.when Mr.Lee Choi have a

problem such as steal,I and with other neighbours will help he’s family and call the police to catch the

thief and bring to the police station.


I will so happy when get a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour

house is brown and inside is yellow and it is so beautiful house.I point the Malays because it makes it

easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we can

help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual

assistance.

By; Nursyazwani, PMR 2013.

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Neighbour is someone who lives in which his or her house is housebounding to my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he is so kind man.My neighbour’s job is a doctor,he is a Chinese man.I like to visit him because he serves me a sunquick .His hometown is at Sungai Petani,Kedah.


He works at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.His child schooling at the  SK Demit

(2),  his child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I am so happy  and proud

because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house, I feel so proud with him and invite him

come again any time.


We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the 

workplace with his car,Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car./ with his shiny and beauticul car

When Mr.Lee Choi have a problem such as stealing,I and with other neighbours will help his family and call 

the police to catch the thief and bring to the police station. ( Blurr, don't understand the point discussed)


I am so happy to have a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour 

house is brown His house painted with brown and yellow. It is so beautiful! I point the Malays because it

makes it easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we 

can help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual 

assistance. ( Should arrange the points going to be discussed before writing the essay, should be organized paragraph, grammar & vocabulary review!)


13/30

Try again, say NO to failure!!

Signature/ 16.Nov.2013


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