Topic ; My neighbour
Neighbour is someone live housebound at my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he so
kind man.My neighbour’s job is doctor,he is Chinese man.I like visit he because he serve me a
sunquick .He’s hometown at Sungai Petani,Kedah.
He’s work at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.He’s child school at the
SK Demit (2) he’s child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I will so happy
and proud because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house I feel so proud with he and
invite he come again any time.
We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the
workplace with his car,the car Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car.when Mr.Lee Choi have a
problem such as steal,I and with other neighbours will help he’s family and call the police to catch the
thief and bring to the police station.
I will so happy when get a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour
house is brown and inside is yellow and it is so beautiful house.I point the Malays because it makes it
easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we can
help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual
assistance.
By; Nursyazwani, PMR 2013.
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Neighbour is someone who lives in which his or her house is housebounding to my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he is so kind man.My neighbour’s job is a doctor,he is a Chinese man.I like to visit him because he serves me a sunquick .His hometown is at Sungai Petani,Kedah.
He works at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.His child schooling at the SK Demit
(2), his child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I am so happy and proud
because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house, I feel so proud with him and invite him
come again any time.
We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the
workplace with his car,Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car./ with his shiny and beauticul car
When Mr.Lee Choi have a problem such as stealing,I and with other neighbours will help his family and call
the police to catch the thief and bring to the police station. ( Blurr, don't understand the point discussed)
I am so happy to have a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour
house is brown His house painted with brown and yellow. It is so beautiful! I point the Malays because it
makes it easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we
can help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual
assistance. ( Should arrange the points going to be discussed before writing the essay, should be organized paragraph, grammar & vocabulary review!)
13/30
Try again, say NO to failure!!
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Neighbour is someone live housebound at my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he so
kind man.My neighbour’s job is doctor,he is Chinese man.I like visit he because he serve me a
sunquick .He’s hometown at Sungai Petani,Kedah.
He’s work at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.He’s child school at the
SK Demit (2) he’s child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I will so happy
and proud because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house I feel so proud with he and
invite he come again any time.
We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the
workplace with his car,the car Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car.when Mr.Lee Choi have a
problem such as steal,I and with other neighbours will help he’s family and call the police to catch the
thief and bring to the police station.
I will so happy when get a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour
house is brown and inside is yellow and it is so beautiful house.I point the Malays because it makes it
easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we can
help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual
assistance.
By; Nursyazwani, PMR 2013.
..................................................................................................................................................
Neighbour is someone who lives in which his or her house is housebounding to my house.My neighbour’s name is Lee Choi , he is so kind man.My neighbour’s job is a doctor,he is a Chinese man.I like to visit him because he serves me a sunquick .His hometown is at Sungai Petani,Kedah.
He works at Hospital Kubang Kerian,he can treat patients with better.His child schooling at the SK Demit
(2), his child name is Kang Hwi and he so smart boy.When I get a new neighbor,I am so happy and proud
because to be a new neighbour.When neighbour visit my house, I feel so proud with him and invite him
come again any time.
We invited from Mr.Lee Choi when he hold a banquet dinner with his family.He go to the
workplace with his car,Mr.Lee Choi is so beautiful and shiny car./ with his shiny and beauticul car
When Mr.Lee Choi have a problem such as stealing,I and with other neighbours will help his family and call
the police to catch the thief and bring to the police station. ( Blurr, don't understand the point discussed)
I am so happy to have a new neighbour and it is easy to ask for help.My colour neighbour
house is brown His house painted with brown and yellow. It is so beautiful! I point the Malays because it
makes it easier for us to understand all what is happening in our neighbourhood.If a neighbour in trouble we
can help them,and if we are in distress they will also help us that need some neighbours for mutual
assistance. ( Should arrange the points going to be discussed before writing the essay, should be organized paragraph, grammar & vocabulary review!)
13/30
Try again, say NO to failure!!
Signature/ 16.Nov.2013
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